Lament – My Bonus Son’s Writing Based On His “The Word Pool” Word Pairing – “Agonizing System”

The Word Pool – Creative Writing Prompts. This piece is based on “Agonizing System” – Written by my bonus son, Joey. It blew me away, so I’m sharing it here.

Lament.

By: Joseph M. Cunningham.

The System was never built with a soul. It measured, calculated, categorized, and optimized, yet it could never love. It rewarded efficiency over compassion, speed over wisdom, and endless consumption over quiet reflection. Humanity willingly surrendered to its rhythm, believing every advancement would lead to freedom, while unknowingly forging stronger chains with every generation.

At first, the distance between humanity and God was almost imperceptible. Prayer became postponed. Worship became optional. Truth became negotiable. The eternal was traded for the immediate, and the sacred slowly gave way to convenience. Few noticed because the change was gradual, wrapped in promises of progress and prosperity. The System never demanded people reject God outright; it merely kept them too distracted to seek Him.

As years passed, silence settled where faith once flourished. Churches became monuments to forgotten devotion, equally to teaching deceit through means of cupidity. Scripture was quoted more for decoration than conviction. Humanity learned to answer every question with data, every fear with technology, and every emptiness with entertainment. Yet none of these could touch the aching void buried within the human spirit.

That void within is agonizing.

It was not the agony of broken bones or open wounds, but the relentless pain of separation. A hunger that no feast could satisfy. A thirst untouched by oceans of success. Every achievement was followed by another restless pursuit because nothing within the System could restore what had been lost. Humanity had disconnected itself from the very source of life while convincing itself it had become more alive than ever.

People smile while their souls wither. Families gather without truly knowing one another. Cities grew brighter as hearts grew darker. Every screen offered connection, yet loneliness reached unprecedented depths. Every voice clamored to be heard, yet few remained willing to listen. The noise became unbearable because it drowned out the whisper that had once called mankind into communion with its Creator.

The system had become humanity’s greatest cathedral all throughout life.

Its commandments were productivity, status, influence, and control. Its prophets were algorithms. Its miracles were machines. Its salvation was promised in future innovations that never arrived. Every solution birthed another crisis, every invention another dependency, every triumph another reminder that the deepest wound remained untouched. Seeming to find a cure, but it never worked.

God lives. Pay attention to your hearts.

His presence lingered beyond the machinery, beyond the endless streams of information, beyond every empire humanity constructed in its own image. He waited where silence still existed, where humility could still kneel, where repentance could still soften a hardened heart. The distance had never been created by His absence but by humanity’s relentless pursuit of everything except Him.

Mankind became so fascinated with the System that we have created only to realize the agonizing cry of a soul desperate to return home. The fish in a bowl cannot be heard under the water if it weeps. No machine, no kingdom, and no System could ever mend what only God could restore. We have created our own Agonizing System. Do you hear that cry of another’s soul?

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Thank you to Miles Rogoish (www.mrface.art and/or IG: @milesrogoish) for the beautiful artwork for the book! “Shifting Identity” was the perfect art prompt for Miles. He recently discovered an appreciation for coffee, and this piece depicts that … his identity shifting!

The new edition on Amazon includes more artwork and short stories all drawn from the prompts in this book.

Our son, Joey, wrote a piece with the prompt, “Agonizing System.” It blew my mind!

A current student wrote a horror piece using “Campbell’s Mode” as an assignment in Comp I. I enjoyed it so much, I asked her if I could include it in the book!

There are millions of prompt possibilities in this book! And, there’s excellent information on continuous writing for those who claim writer’s block from time to time … and for those who don’t.

I’m pleased with this project, and I use it myself.

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“Whispered Gravity” – the Weight of the Soul v. Gratitude of the Heart. The 6-27-26 “The Word Pool” Pairing/Writing Prompt

When the traumas of life weigh heavy on my soul and a single vocal utterance threatens to bring tears to my eyes and my voice, I tend to stay silent. I carry the weight of heartache deep inside, invisible, pressing, hidden … a spoken word from that depth of pain carries whispered gravity … the weight of my soul. Only to one or two, maybe, can I utter these words … or so I think. That’s what my mind tells me – no one will understand. You carry this alone. Don’t tell anyone what you feel. But my mind is wrong.

In fact, my mind lies.

My mind and my soul are separate.

I have come to understand this.

I have come to understand that when I share the weight of my soul – those things that once I kept hidden and unspoken, that gravity that I pressed down where no one could see – when I share those things, I discover that I am, in fact, not alone, and that people all around me walk through similar things to my own.

Yesterday I was in a meeting, and in small talk, where I listen with purpose nowadays, I discovered that a woman I know and I both have a family member in hospice. Same stage. Same pain. Same helpless feeling. We connected in a new way – call it a trauma bond, if you will, but it is that knowing that you’re not alone that can silence the mind and feed the soul.

Life is hard.

There’s so much pain.

A friend of mine lost her husband in May.

My best friend’s son died on the first of June.

My family member is transitioning to Heaven, and we are sad, mad, glad, and all the emotions.

An ‘adopted’ daughter was in an accident and in jail.

Another ‘adopted’ daughter has her head stuck so far up her own bootwah that she can’t see the forest for the one tree, and I needed her. She wasn’t there.

My child is struggling with a pain that I cannot fix.

Half of my children are estranged from me.

A former student’s boyfriend was killed in a car accident this week.

The media fearmongers want us to all hate each other.

If you don’t align with someone else’s political beliefs, you’re ‘canceled.’

My mind says hide, cry, isolate.

My soul says … NO. Talk about it. Share. Find peace in the midst of the storm and share that testimony with others. Be grateful. Find the things to be grateful for in this life, as I live each day as if it is the only one I have.

Celebrate today! Get grateful, Dacia, BECAUSE …

Today, God is King, and He is on His throne, and His Word is Living and Active!

Today, the grass is more than green.

Today, I have a husband who treasures me.

Today, I attended the BAD Girls meeting, and it was awesome. If you don’t know what that is, well, you’re missing out. It’s an Anonymous thing.

Today, I ran into my friend, Kristi, and it was lovely to see her so unexpectedly.

Today, I met a woman named Vicki, who, it turns out, I’ll see again in three weeks, and the meeting was more than fortuitous.

Today, my sourdough starter smelled just right.

Today, I realized our puppy has stopped nipping us! Blessing!

Today, I messaged my two best friends as I do every day, and I’m beyond grateful for them.

Today, my baby girl told me she loves me.

Today, my husband and I shared sweet moments at the bedside of a family member – precious moments – the kind to treasure because those will soon be gone.

Today, I listened to my mechanical valve ticking when the room was quiet.

Today, I ate some banana bread loaded with coconut, flaxseed, almonds, pecans, and chocolate chips.

Today, I had a double vanilla cappuccino, and I think I’ll have another one.

Today, I briefly discussed poetry with my oldest son.

Today, I graded poems in my Intro to Creative Writing class that brought tears to my eyes.

Today, my sister-in-law told me my haircut is classy.

Today, our air conditioning works, and it’s forever hot outside.

Today, I choose to have appreciation, respect, and understanding for all people.

Today, I have lovely friends to call whenever I am down, tempted to be down, or need to be told to get my head out of my a*s and get grateful.

Today, I do not have to let life’s gravity weigh me down. No more holding it in. No more whispering.

Today, I choose to share my experience, strength, and hope.

Today, I choose to share my soul.

Today, I’m talking for and to myself. Reminder to shake off gravity and embrace gratitude!

You do with it all what you will.

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“Whispered Gravity” – The Word Pool Prompt for June 27, 2026.

Using the word pairing, write a sentence, a story, or a poem, or draw a sketch or paint a picture. Set your mind free and create. Post it here. Post it there. Post it wherever. Only, please tag it #thewordpool so I can enjoy it with you. Happy creating!

This adjective/noun combo comes to you directly out of “The Word Pool” – I didn’t cheat. I opened the book, took the first adjective I randomly selected with my finger (without looking), and then I turned to the noun section and randomly selected a noun with my finger (again, without looking). Maybe I wanted to choose something different, but no, we go with those FIRST finger-chosen words! Ta-da! It’s that complicated.  Now, we write or draw; whichever we do, we create!

~ Dacia Cunningham, creator of “The Word Pool: Quiet Chaos: A Creative Writing Toolkit / Game of Words, Meaning, and Imagination.”

What If You NEVER Ran Out of Writing or Sketching Ideas Again?

“The Word Pool” has MILLIONS of Writing and Sketching Prompts. Don’t Believe Me? Read This. Today’s Prompt? OPPOSITE STUDENT DIFFERENTIATES. WTH?!?! Right? Nope. My Brain Had This.

Inside this book is a creative system disguised as a game—built from over 5 million word pairings designed to spark unexpected connections, challenge your thinking, and unlock your creativity. Whether you’re a writer staring at a blank page, an artist unsure what to draw, or someone who “just isn’t creative,” this book gives you something most people are missing: A way to start.

Using simple but powerful techniques like Continuous Writing (Dr. Price’s “Rule of Apple”), associative thinking, and structured challenges like Campbell’s Mode, you’ll learn how to:

  • generate ideas on demand
  • push past creative blocks
  • connect unlikely concepts into stories, characters, and visual scenes
  • build confidence in your creative voice

This isn’t just a writing book. It’s a tool for teachers, students, writers, artists, and creators of all kinds.

Open the book.

Pick two words. Or three.

Write it. Sketch it.

Let’s go.

Here’s an example of exactly how to use “The Word Pool.”

Randomly, I’ve chosen “Student,” “Opposite,” and “Differentiate.” Now, a verb isn’t always necessary. Most of the time, I begin with simply an adjective and a noun. Recently, I had my Comp I students write a short story with 4 out of 6 adjective/noun combos from “The Word Pool.” Their combos were: Noxious Room, Incessant Secret, Fortunate Painting, Faux Email, Disloyal Blood, and Approaching Lantern. They chose 4 of these 6, which I had randomly chosen from “The Word Pool.” Their stories were AMAZING, verging on King-worthy creepy horror stories! I was thrilled to say the least, and enjoyed reading each one of them. Those students didn’t have those stories in their heads BEFORE the word combinations came their way … the word combinations sparked the ideas! This book gives birth and gives life to creativity! So, let’s get back to … “Opposite Student Differentiate!”

I’m going to set a timer for 10 minutes and see where my mind goes. I have no plan. Literally, I opened the book a bit ago, chose words at random by looking away as I flipped pages, pointing to a spot on the page at random, and then looking at where I landed. So, here we go.

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The light came in through the window as she sat staring off into the distance. To an outsider, it looked as if she were pondering which book to pull off the grand bookshelf, but that’s not what reality was in that moment. She hurt inside. She didn’t think she could pull it off, and everyone kept telling her she’d be fine; she could do it. But, she knew she couldn’t. She knew that she’d fail. She knew she was the opposite of what a student ought to be. She didn’t want to acquiesce to anyone else’s way of doing the things before her. She liked to live by the seat of her pants, be carefree, but they wanted to put her in a box … and she let them. Traveling. Disappearing. Hiking. Exploring. Go. Go. Go. That is what she wanted. She wanted to learn from life – meet people in strange places, delve into their cultures, experience humanity and landscapes, and all the beautiful things. But no, here she was in the great library, surrounded by books, the light from the outside pouring in through the window taunting her, telling her all that she was missing out on by being stuck in that space.

Learn all the things – learn the business.

It will be yours soon.

You have to study.

That’s what her grandfather said. He wanted to leave it all to her, and she didn’t want it. The whole family said their future rested on her shoulders, and she wanted to burst out of her skin. They all saw no other future for her, but she sat there knowing that she, the opposite student, differentiated between freedom and a state of giving up – and in that moment, as she sat staring at the bookshelf, lost in thought, looking like she was doing as expected, the escape plan began to shape in her mind. She had to leave, run, fly. Anywhere but here. They’d figure out how to pick up the pieces without her. She needed the sand between her toes, eagles soaring high above her, snowflakes hitting her face – so many wonderful places and so little time, and she would not waste a moment. No. Not me, she thought. I will be free.

“Mary Ann, your grandfather wants a word.” The voice snapped her out of her plan.

She looked toward the voice, and there stood her grandfather’s solicitor in his crisp three-piece suit. It was black, and it made him look like a funeral home director. For her, that’s what he felt like, and she simply nodded understanding. She looked out the window where her freedom lay, just briefly. She sighed, then looked at the solicitor’s unsmiling face. Quietly, she followed him out of her grandfather’s grand library and down the hall to the dining room, where she knew, at this time of day, her grandfather was having his fifth cup of coffee …

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And that is 10 minutes.

I don’t know Mary Ann, and I don’t know why she doesn’t want to run the family business, and I certainly do not know where that’s coming from inside me. We could have a psychology session, I suppose, and sit and dissect how Mary Ann represents a part of my psyche, and that could be fun, but that’s not the point. The point is, without the prompt “Opposite Student Differentiate,” that story would never have surfaced from my mind.

Sometimes my posts are non-fiction. Once I choose my word pairing, I sit down, open the laptop, and words just start spilling. If I “get stuck,” I employ my friend Doug’s continuous writing method (which is discussed in “The Word Pool” book) … apple, apple, apple, I just got a text from my son. He said something about eating breakfast. Wish I could be eating it with him. I hate the distance between us. And then, when I’m ready to get back on task … get back on task. Words can be edited. Rearranged. Changed. Just keep writing. Beautiful things come when we stop trying to control them.

Ah … that’s a lesson for life, too, is it not? Beautiful things come when we stop trying to control them. That’s bumper sticker stuff!

Long story short here … use “The Word Pool” to spark your creativity. It’s fun, and you never know where it will take you! Every time you sit down to write, something NEW happens. Or when you need an idea to draw … it’s in this book.

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My student, Izabel Baker, permitted me to share the short story she wrote for Comp I. The assignment was to take 4 of the 6 “The Word Pool” word pairings and freewrite – let the words take you wherever they want. Those pairings again were: Noxious Room, Incessant Secret, Fortunate Painting, Faux Email, Disloyal Blood, and Approaching Lantern. Here is Izabel’s story. See if you can find the word pairings.

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Dear Sadie, Please Come Home by Izabel Baker

Why? Why did I pick up the phone? Why did I listen? Why did I come here? Why? Why, after all these years, these long ten years, why?

Every morning, all the same, I awoke, I made breakfast, the phone rang, all the same. I ignored it, all the same, like every morning. It would pass, the tone would end, and it would be gone. I went on with my day. I got dressed, got my shoes, and got my keys. Then, unlike every other morning, the phone rang again.

That was wrong. It never rings twice; it only rings once. It couldn’t ring twice, no, no. There was no one to call twice; they were gone by this time. Every morning, they made the phone call and shortly after were gone forever. How could they call again? But all the same, I ignored it, as I should. Answering would be a grave mistake, grave indeed.

I left, left the house, left the phone behind, there, couldn’t answer it now. It couldn’t reach me now. I’ve moved one, moved one from that, left it behind me, gone forever—no point in answering.

Then I returned home, the phone was ringing when I arrived, and it rang all night; it didn’t stop. Finally, I couldn’t take it, that droning noise, piercing my skull, rattling my bones. I made a grave mistake, I picked up the phone, and I answered it.

“Sadie, are you coming home? We found your bed empty this morning. Mom’s really worried about you. We all are. I- I really need you, Sadie. Please, your little sister really wants you to come home. Please, Dad’s really mad, Mom’s just crying in the kitchen. Sadie, please come home.”

She sounded so real, so alive, so vivid, so visceral. I couldn’t. The sound of her voice chilled me, froze me. So why? Why did I listen? Why did I return?

The house emerged from the ground, surrounded by open fields. There were a few cows out there, what few could survive without human aid on just the grass that grew. I stared at it for a long time; that thing loomed over the road. Why didn’t I turn back then? All I would’ve had to do was turn the key and drive away, but something pulled on me.

Then I saw it and saw her. A young girl standing on the porch, holding a lantern, a small, dim lantern close to her chest. She was almost hiding it from me, like she didn’t want me to take it. It wasn’t Tammy, no, Tammy was only twelve years old; that girl was much taller, older, something about her felt a little familiar, though.

I got out of my car, and she turned into the house, but she left the door open. It was dark inside, and I could barely see in. I couldn’t decide how I felt. I felt repulsed, my mind told me to run, to leave, but deep inside of me, I felt compelled to enter. Maybe that’s what they call a soul; maybe it was calling for me inside. Left behind when I left here ten years ago. Now that I think about it, it was exactly ten years ago that I got the first phone call.

Every day for ten years, the phone rang every morning at 7:34, every morning since.

I took one step inside, then another, then another, then another, then the door slammed behind me. When I turned to open it, it was locked. I couldn’t leave. I never should have come in here. Why, why don’t I listen to my gut?

Then there she was again, past the foyer, at the end of the long hallway, that girl, but she was closer than before now, and her lantern was held so tightly; she held it just in front of her chest. I went down the hall toward her; dust floated in the air, the wallpaper was peeling, the floorboards creaked, bugs crawled this way and that. The water and termite damage had gone long untreated, ten years untreated.

When I looked up, she was gone, but to my left, there was a door. A faint light came from within; I turned inside. The study. I never came in here. Dad would yell if I ever did, but yelling was all he ever did. A lamp flickered in the corner, the books on the shelves were sloppily thrown in, and the old computer was covered in dust. I doubt the keyboard even worked, not that I cared to see what he had been doing on it, just when he was on it. He was occupied then, in his own room of the house, for just a few moments, I could forget about him.

On the wall, there was a painting. What a fortunate painting it was. All of us, mom, dad, me, and my little sister, all smiling. It didn’t see the real us; it saw the nicely kept home, not the stains and messes. It saw a happy family, not the horrors left by our father. It saw an able-bodied woman, not a mother whose health declined further every day.

Tammy, you bright little girl, you had the biggest smile. I like to believe a little bit of it was real. You were always so positive. I did my best to keep you safe so that you could keep smiling. I’m sorry I left, I’m sorry, you probably didn’t smile again, did you?

There she was again, that girl with the lantern; she was standing in the doorway, holding the lantern a little closer to me. She turned away down the hall, but when I got there, she was gone again. There wasn’t a faint light this time; it was darker than before.

There wasn’t any direction; I just wandered for a bit, turning through the halls. The home was larger than I remembered. There was a stairwell; the boards had been chewed through in some places, probably termites, possibly mice. The railing had fallen out in some places and was left in pieces on the floor below. I found myself ascending the stairs, up to the top, then down to the right, a room with an open window; the wind blew the curtain around.

This was Mother’s room.

This was where she looked out, her only window into the outside world. She used to knit blankets, clothes, and tablecloths. Then her health declined; she stopped smiling, stopped knitting, barely moved, only to cook and clean when she could, when the pain wasn’t too much. But it usually was, so I did.

The room hadn’t changed, except for the condition of it; like the rest of the house, the wood was damaged, but even more so up here. I didn’t trust the floorboards; I shouldn’t have. I made my way downstairs, then… the floor gave in.

My heart lurched for a moment; it felt like a moment in a cartoon where the character is suspended in the air for a moment before falling to the ground. But just like in the cartoons, I eventually fell. Unlike in the cartoons, I wasn’t fine and revived after. My breath left me; maybe it was my lungs that had been suspended in the air, not me.

I couldn’t breathe, couldn’t even scream.

I had fallen through the floor onto the dining table, which cracked in two. It felt like my back had done the same, but I managed to get up. A part of me wished I couldn’t so I could lay there and die, but something called for me, not a voice but a feeling. She was closer than ever before, that girl, her lantern stretched out towards me, almost a full arm’s length. For the first time, her mouth moved, and she spoke, “Remember, remember what you did. Those splats of blood, that disloyal blood. Remember why you left, why you abandoned everyone.”

I looked beside me. There were drops of blood on the table where I had fallen, bits of wood had scratched into my skin, leaving gashes. I tried to wipe it away, but it smeared across my arm. I burned everywhere: the bruising on my back, the cuts on my sides, but I had to keep moving.

I felt bits of resentment towards that girl with the lantern, forcing me to come here, forcing me to feel this pain, forcing me to relive this place, forcing me to remember.

I felt tears come up; they came through gasps of pain and gasps for air. I struggled to move forward on the other side of the door, leading out of the dining room was the kitchen. I went to the wall and slid down it. I didn’t need to know what was on the other side; I could smell it, that thick, pungent odor of blood. There must have been so much on the other side; the wounds must have gone deep. They must have been in so much pain. It was my fault, wasn’t it? If I hadn’t left, I would have stayed. If I had come home sooner, maybe then.

I almost began to sob, but the shaking of my body was so excruciating that I clenched my throat in an attempt to stop it. That noxious room on the other side felt like it was growing larger, more powerful, more gruesome. The longer I waited here by the door, the stronger the smell grew; I heard dripping.

Blood dripping, drop by drop by drop, onto the tile.

I knew I needed to turn the corner. One inch at a time, then another, then another, I peered around the door. I never should have, never should have picked up the phone, never should have listened, never should have come here, never, never. Never should have turned that corner. I never should have left, never should have left Tammy behind. I should have taken her with me, should have gotten help, and done something. But no, no, I left by myself, escaped, I used to say, but no. I didn’t escape this place; I abandoned my sister, my little sister. It was my responsibility to keep her safe, to protect her. I hated my mom, my mom never protected me, never kept me safe, why then, should I for another? Why? Why did I let my resentment for her allow Tammy to get hurt?

She was there, right on the floor. She must have run to the door, tried to escape, but bullets are much faster. Blood soiled her clothes, spilled around her in a pool on the ground. I started to tremble, felt like screaming, felt like running, but I couldn’t. I was frozen, stuck staring at the scene.

Mom lay on the ground, shot straight through the stomach. My eyes followed her to a large metal pot in front of her, to a pair of large boots, and up to a man. I knew who it was, but if I were a stranger coming across the scene, he would have been unidentifiable. His face was gone; the skin seemingly melted off in a spot where his left eye should have been. Large blisters swelled around the area across his neck and arm down to his hand, where a gun still lay. Oil and blood dripped from his face onto the cold tile.

What happened first? Did mom attack him, and then he shot her? Did he shoot Tammy, and Mom throw the pot at him? How? How could something like this happen? Why? If I had stayed, was there something I could have done?

“No point.”

I turned around, there she was again, right behind me, holding her lantern, but still far away enough that I couldn’t quite make out her features.

“No point in asking questions, you know what must be done. Now go, do it.”

She didn’t sound sympathetic; I wouldn’t either. Who else was there to blame myself? But I knew what she meant. I knew what must be done. I went to the back door and found it unlocked. I dug three holes, took what felt like hours, but the sun wasn’t even considering rising yet. I went inside the house, for a moment I considered leaving my father there, but in the end decided he ought to be placed in the ground anyway, it wouldn’t be fair for my mother and Tammy to be laid below our father.

I couldn’t fashion a true gravestone, not now at least, but I found old scrap wood and a knife from the kitchen and scratched into it plates for my mother and Tammy. “Here Lies Tamala R. Julias. May 2, 2004 – April 10, 2016. Rest in peace, Bright Child.”

I didn’t make one for my father; he ought to be buried, not honored or respected.

I stood, my work was done, and I saw an approaching lantern. The girl came all the way to me. This time, she was close enough for me to make out her features, my own features. She was fifteen years old, with a bruise on her arm, sullen cheeks, and so much shame.

Maybe, maybe I ought to forgive myself, or rather, forgive her.

She was only fifteen, I was only fifteen then, the past is behind me. I can only move forward. That old version of myself, a ghost, a memory, whatever the vision was in front of me, handed me the lantern. It felt nice, expelling some sphere of warmth around it. I looked at fifteen-year-old-me, “You poor thing, please, please move on, I forgive you.”

With that, a smile, albeit a painful one, stretched across her cheeks, and she faded away. I was alone now, but then again, I had been alone for many, many years.

Tammy would forever be gone, but I found a new part of myself.

Life wasn’t over, mine wasn’t. Tammy would probably tell me I should keep on living.

I found a picture of Tammy, Mom, and me, one of the few that was just the three of us. I decided to keep it; every night on my bedside table, I told them goodnight, and maybe beyond the veil, if there is one, they said it back.

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Dacia Lené Cunningham is an Assistant Professor of English at Tulsa Community College, where she blends creative writing with real-world communication in courses ranging from Novel Writing to Composition.

She is the author of novels, short stories, and children’s books, including A Kiss in the Rain and The American Queen, and she founded the TCC Writers’ Series to bring authors and publishing professionals directly to her students. https://guides.library.tulsacc.edu/TCCwritersseries

She believes anyone can write—you just need the right tools.

The Town That Raised Me – McAlester, Oklahoma. A Writing Exercise from “The Making of Story” by Alice LaPlante

Alice LaPlante – “The Making of a Story” – p. 130 – “Render a Tree, Capture the Forest.” Part 2. Exercise 2.

Using 12 details, describe a place. I chose my hometown. And … well, in true Dacia style, I used far more than 12 details for you. The piece I used as an example for class did not expand to quite this length. Once you start describing a place, details tend to crop up … and let me tell you, I have far more in my head and heart than are contained here. McAlester people, how’d I do describing our hometown?

When the bombs go off at the Ammunition Plant, you feel it through your bones, and even though it has happened your entire life, it still raises the hairs on your arms. The Ammunition Plant is on the southernmost end of town, and I didn’t go to that side of town often. I was a north-side kid.

There are only 18,000 people in McAlester, Oklahoma – the same population as it had when I was a teenager there in the late 1980s. The town is large enough for you to stay in your own area, your own zone, where your people are for the most part. As a north-side kid, I grew up on the north side of town, a block from the city limit, which was just on the other side of that last street in town, which is aptly named North Street. St. Joseph’s Catholic Cemetery was on North Street, a block from the rock house I grew up in at 602 E. Ashland Avenue. You could see the cemetery from my front yard, and that is where my two lifelong best friends, Lana and Jackie, and I played as children. The gravestones in there were ancient, dating back to the early 1800s, and in my head, I made up stories about the people buried there – especially the mass grave dedicated to Italian coal miners who lost their lives in 1892 in an explosion in the hills and ‘mountains’ of Southeastern Oklahoma. Lana, Jackie, and I rode our bikes around and around and around that cemetery. Played hide-and-seek. Climbed on Jesus. Popped wheelies out of ditches.

My favorite restaurant, where I grew up, is in Krebs, Oklahoma, just outside the McAlester line, where Krebs butts up against it like a suburb. Krebs is an old Italian settlement, and the family-owned and operated restaurants I grew up eating in are still there. You can go to Pete’s Place; that’s whatever. It’s the most popular … but just a bit further down the road sits Roseanna’s Italian Food, and that is where my car goes whenever I get the opportunity. Home-style and home-style-served Italian dishes with giant meatballs, tangy salad, and pasta that will cause you to kiss your fingers like an old Italian grandmother. Mwah! After that, going to Lovera’s Market in Krebs is a must – home-raised meat, homemade Italian sauces. Or don’t go. Leave that food there for those of us raised on it, who appreciate the treasure existing there just outside of the McAlester city line.

McAlester is the town of Monroe in my book “A Kiss in the Rain.” Those who’ve read it and grown up in McAlester like me knew their town as they read of landmarks, stores, and roads in the pages of that novel – a grocery store in the middle of town which used to be “Safeway,” the old Busby Theater (which is gone now), the Courthouse, which once was a grand hotel in its hay day – tunnels ran underneath it to the theater, the prison – OSP – we are all so proud, the grand yellow home at the corner of 2nd and Miami that once belonged to friend of my parentsTandy town. Highway 69, which curves around the eastern side of the town, separates McAlester and Krebs. Walmart, which only locals know how to get to because of someone’s idea of improvement to the highway structure there. The church I grew up in – Lakewood – sits on the most curved part of Highway 69 as it rounds from the eastern side of the town to the southern portion of town. The movie theater is still there, holding memories – some I’ll discuss, some I won’t. The high school. The signs on every road leading out of town that say, “Warning: Hitchhikers may be escaping convicts.” I’ve always read “escaping” as an adjective until recently, when my husband read “escaping” as a verb … and now, I can’t take those signs seriously.

McAlester is where I was born and where I’m from. It gave me my best friends, and a host of other people from school and church alike that I hold dear in my heart. McAlester is the town that raised me, and there’s much more I could say about it, but for now (to my students), knowing I grew up playing in a cemetery and eating fine Italian food is what you get to know. Another little layer pulled back on the onion of who Mrs. C. is.

“Jaunty Choice Wear” – Today’s “The Word Pool” Creative Writing Prompt

Live every moment as if it might be your last. Make JAUNTY CHOICES.

It has been two weeks since I made a “The Word Pool” post; maybe it has been three weeks. Most likely three weeks. My 85-year-old mother-in-law was in the hospital with pneumonia for 10 days; she has COPD and A-Fib as well as some other complications. The following week, my best friend’s 30-year-old son died from complications of Type 1 Diabetes, which had gone undiagnosed/undetected. 30. He was 30. Devastating is not a good word, but it comes close to capturing the emotions surrounding this loss. I sat with her in the ICU and sat next to her at his memorial service. She’s been my best friend for 47 years, and her pain is mine – though my experience with it is not as his Mom but as his Mom’s sister – his aunt, if you will. He was ornery and perfect – a country guy who loved racing and building vehicles. He gave his mom white hair, which she colors. I’ll miss his messages and phone calls, but not like she will – not to the same degree. He was her baby.

My mother-in-law is home now from the hospital, but she’s not improving, and she doesn’t want any more hospital visits. She’s tired, she keeps telling us, and we know what she means because she’s making no bones about it. She’s ready to go ‘home’ to be with God, whom she loves, and her husband, who has been gone from her for almost 40 years. Never have I once heard her refer to him by his name, only “my husband.” That touches me deep inside. All these years apart, and he is still with her every day. Everyone who encounters her says, “She’s so cute.” She is. Sparkly, ornery eyes. Sicilian. She loves food, and to extend life with medication and hospital visits and “eating right,” which means no salt, she would have to have no more salt, no more sweets, and she does not want that kind of life—no more doctors. No more telling her she can’t have this or that. We started hospice this past Friday, and mom is quite content eating pretzels and cake, smiling with every bite. We don’t know how long we will have her with us, but we will treasure every moment.

Mom loves to get her nails done, and usually, she wears a jaunty choice of nail color. Yellow. Lime green. Bright blue. You never know what she’ll come home with on her fingers and toenails. With twinkling eyes, she shows her nails off proudly, and I think … I want and need to be so bold. Make jaunty choices, Dacia! Be free of concern about what others think. Wear what makes you joyful! All the hoop earrings. Every pair of cowboy boots. All the rhinestones. Sparkle! Heck yeah. Just not to the yellow fingernail stage of not giving a flip what people think just yet, but I’ll get there. Seeing mom smile after we comment on her nails is joy-giving to her and to me, to us. Maybe that is why she does it.

Lesson to learn here … live joyfully. Every moment. We never know how many moments we have left. Live each one.

Let go of what my sober-for-39-years husband likes to call the “flowers” that continually try to bloom in us in negative ways and steal our joy – the seven deadly sins. Our defects of character. Ask God to remove from you each day … or let me talk to myself here … ask God to remove from me each day dishonesty, envy, greed, lust, pride, anger, gluttony, and sloth. I added dishonesty because that is a ‘flower’ that has rooted deeply in my life that I daily ask for help weeding. Dishonesty, pride, greed, gluttony, anger … these root deep in me, and I daily ask for help to remove these unwanted ‘flowers’ – and that they be replaced with the beauty of humility, generosity, chastity, kindness, temperance, patience, and diligence! These things bring JOY to our lives – and as a result – serenity and peace.

These are not virtues I can grow on my own. These require God’s intervention in my life, so I daily ask him to remove the deadly ‘flowers,’ and to instill in me that which comes from him – the true beauty – flowers from heaven, if you will.

In the midst of all we have been through in the last three weeks, I opened “The Word Pool” today, for the first time in a while, and I randomly chose “Jaunty Choice Wears” – and my freewriting took me from an explanation of why I’ve not made a post all the way to a pathway for JOYFUL living, no matter our circumstances. Live each moment with God’s assistance. Living according to His will for your life.

People always want to know what God’s Will is …

It is quite simple. Be grateful. Admit you need a higher power, that you, in your own power, mess things up, and ask to be of use to Him each day. Then, set about doing the next right thing as your day goes along. Make good choices. Make jaunty choices.

Paint your fingernails lime green and share a smile with every person you meet.

Tell them your experience, strength, and hope.

Live each moment as if it might be your last.

So be it.

“The Word Pool” is a Creative Writing / Drawing Prompt book with millions of writing and drawing prompts.

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“The Word Pool” – New Book Review!

The Word Pool” is a beautifully written book devoted to writers who love to play with language. The idea of pairing unrelated adjectives and nouns together to impregnate them with new meaning makes for unforgettable writing, Thomas Paine wrote about the “summer soldier and the sunshine patriot.” His purpose was to steel the resolve of the American Army in the face of overwhelming British military power. His use of words was unforgettable, inspiring Americans for 250 years.

“The Word Pool” gives writers the tool to match unlikely words together to create new meaning. Complete with exercises and examples, this work is pure genius. It is a “must have” for every writer’s library.

Merle Davenport

President 

Tulsa NightWriters

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https://a.co/d/01MDEqI8 – The Word Pool

New Review of “The Word Pool” – a Creative Writing and Drawing Prompt Book with MILLIONS of Possibilities

New review of my creative writing prompt book, “The Word Pool,” from Forest Issac Jones, author of ‘Good Trouble: The Selma, Alabama and Derry, Northern Ireland Connection 1963-1972.’

“Students of writing and writers overall will love this book, and ‘The Word Pool’ will be widely recommended by teachers of writing. It is a true example of what a creative writing tool kit should be. The authors leave you with tidbits that will spark ideas and great examples of writing prompts. This book is full of little things that will help writing students. There are great parts in the book that give lists of nouns, adjectives, verbs, and writers are shown phrases and best pairings to use. It is a useful book for any writer or student of writing, and it shows the author’s sincere love of language and writing. Highly recommended.” – Forest Issac Jones, Ed. D., Author of ‘Good Trouble: The Selma, Alabama and Derry, Northern Ireland Connection 1963-1972’ – forestissacjones.com

Thank you to Dr. Jones for his review!

And, y’all, I’m telling you – this book is fun. I use it – and I wrote it/put it together – and I find it useful! There are so many possibilities. Each Saturday, I’m committed to opening the book with the specific intent of using it here in this space – to show you how it works!

Over the last few weeks, I have opened the adjective and noun pages and find myself using these combinations:

Emaciated Judgment – Respected Trunk – Dull Scandal – Glazed Notion – Naughty Skill – Naughty Skillet – Loyal Package – Cold-Hearted Cookie

Some of them have caused me to write fiction. Some non-fiction. I just let the words roll out without a plan one in my head.

Tomorrow is Saturday, so we shall see what combination comes! I’m excited!

If you find yourself with a copy of “The Word Pool,” I’d love to hear your thoughts, see what you end up writing or drawing … perhaps I can add your drawing to the next edition of the book!

“Emaciated Judgment” – The Word Pool Prompt for May 23, 2026 Intersects with AA Principes

This morning, I opened “The Word Pool” to the adjective “Emaciated.” I wanted to choose something different, but no – go with the first one you see. So, I then turned to the nouns, and my finger landed on “Judgment.” I typed those two words on this screen and let my thoughts roll. Here is what came:

Emaciated Judgment

“Can you think of anyone, if you’re honest with yourself, that you don’t have advice for?” Patrick asks this question of alcoholics, and I watch them say, “Yes,” and they’ll want to name a person and defend the response, but then Patrick tells them to get honest …, and as the person reflects over their life, a light comes on – if they’re honest. The truest answer is, “No.” We have advice for every person we encounter – every person but ourselves. And I turn the question inward – “Is there anyone in your life, Dacia, that you don’t have advice for?” Even when I walk through Lowe’s or sit at a table at the Cracker Barrel, I find myself sitting in judgment of most every person I see. If I’m honest, I can and will admit that.

This is especially true of an alcoholic. We believe we are different; we don’t fit. It certainly cannot be anything wrong with us – it must be everyone else, and the blame game is a way of life. If you wouldn’t. If he didn’t. If. If. If. Every other person needs to change in our emaciated judgment. Our alcoholic judgment, which pulls the victim card and waves it high and proud. It’s you; it’s not me. Poor me, and I drink, I shop, I seek attention, I pick up drugs … I’m saying “I” as a stand-in for all alcoholics.

We have an illness of a spiritual, physical, and mental nature. If we straighten out spiritually, the mental and physical straighten out naturally. But this is a hard thing to accept; it is an even harder thing to put into action. Taking steps to sort out the spiritual illness – first admitting it exists and second being willing to get honest about ourselves, our insecurities, our fears, our judgment – this is where the ‘rubber hits the road’ for an alcoholic who desires recovery. It is work.

I see the commercials on TV now for a pill you can take to help you stop drinking. I know alcoholics who take these medications, and hear me, please, these are Band-Aids. They are Big Pharma taking advantage of people who do not want to put in work, who do not want to take the steps, who want to (taking a phrase from the Big Book) rest on their laurels and have their problem solved without any actual change occurring inside. It is too uncomfortable to do the work in AA, which requires the individual to do work on self, to step away from that emaciated judgement I spoke of earlier, into an acceptance of the reality of who he or she is in the scope of life and recognition of the spiritual illness which only a higher power can resolve. The thing about this intense and discomforting work is that the result on the other side, once the steps are taken with willingness and honesty, is well … serenity.

On page 77 of the 12 & 12 (Twelve Steps and Twelve Traditions), it says, “Learning how to live in the greatest peace, partnership, and brotherhood with all men and women, of whatever description, is a moving and fascinating adventure.” We read those words at the dining room table this last week as we sat with a recovering alcoholic going through the steps, and I wrote the words down on a piece of paper. This is a moving and fascinating adventure indeed! The book goes on to say, “Every AA has found that he can make little headway in this new adventure of living until he first backtracks and really makes an accurate and unsparing survey of the human wreckage he has left in his wake.”  A little later in the paragraph, it says, “But if a willing start is made, then the great advantages of doing this will so quickly reveal themselves that the pain will be lessened as one obstacle after another melts away.” Ahhhhhh … that’s what the work produces – the melting away of all that keeps an alcoholic sick – those things that are hidden deep inside, that no one knows, that the alcoholic doesn’t even know until the work is done.

When Patrick asks that question, “Can you think of anyone, if you’re honest with yourself, that you don’t have advice for?”, now, on the other side of recovery, I find I still do have advice for most people I encounter, but I’m quickly able to remind myself that most people, in fact, all people, are actors on the stage – we all participate in our own play where we believe we have control, though we are but actors. We want to manage the lights, the scenery, the other players, and the lines people say. We imagine ourselves as the director, but we are not – and we try to assume that role – and we sit in judgment because the other actors do not do what it is that we want them to do, and we find ourselves angry – and some of us take this to an extreme, and we drink over it.

Here I smile – today’s “The Word Pool” choice was emaciated judgment, and this often-had conversation from my dining room table is where that word combo took me immediately. When I sit in judgment of others, forgetting that they are also actors trying to control a show, I feel different, insecure, and my judgment is based on corrupted feelings where my base instincts are affected, afflicted, and I become defensive. I am set apart, and I put myself in a corner with hackles up and ready to fight – though most likely I’ll destroy myself along with everyone I encounter, especially those closest to me. This is not based on healthy, recovered thinking. It is emaciated – withered, shrunken, gaunt … weak judgment. It is a spiritual sickness.

As a recovered alcoholic, I know that apart from staying in fit spiritual condition, my judgment quickly becomes emaciated. I must do the work to stay in connection with my higher power, which for me is the God of the Universe who cares about me so much that He sent His Son into this world to die, to become a sacrifice, the only sacrifice that would suffice to save those who call upon His name. That is my personal belief and understanding based on my reading and research – based on my experience, strength, and hope. I cannot and will not push that (that you must do or believe exactly as I do) on anyone else – on you. Take your own journey to ‘serenity’ – perhaps through a pill – doubtful it will happen truly, but hey, you do you. Or find your own path to a higher power by realizing that you, in your own power, cannot turn emaciated judgment into serenity of heart, mind, soul, and body. You can try, but you’ll drive yourself to the depths of insanity. Step Two in the Big Book says this, “2. Came to believe that a Power greater than ourselves could restore us to sanity.” There’s something to this – and I can preach on it, but at this point, I remind myself that each of us has to truly come to this realization on our own – out of desperation for wholeness – or it doesn’t stick. Do it or don’t. Right?

Patrick also says, after taking people through the steps, “Don’t get mad at me six months down the road, if I make more use of this information than you do.”

Eek.

But he’s not wrong.

So, Dacia, today, where is your judgment at? Is it through the lens of your higher power where you recognize that every person you encounter struggles through this life just like you do, so grace and compassion are a must? Or will I not set my mind right, stay in a state of ‘I’m the one in charge,’ and want to direct every person I encounter to do my bidding and find myself feeling crazy because no one will do what I want?

It is a choice.

“Emaciated Judgment” – The Word Pool Prompt for May 23, 2026.

Using the word pairing, write a sentence, a story, a poem, or draw a sketch, paint a picture. Set your mind free and create. Post it here. Post it there. Post it wherever. Only, please tag it #thewordpool so I can enjoy it with you. Happy creating!

This adjective/noun combo comes to you directly out of “The Word Pool” – I didn’t cheat. I opened the book, took the first adjective I randomly selected with my finger (without looking), and then I turned to the noun section and randomly selected a noun with my finger (again, without looking). Maybe I wanted to choose something different, but no, we go with those FIRST finger-chosen words!  Ta-da! It’s that complicated.   Now, we write or draw; whichever we do, we create!

~ Dacia Cunningham, creator of “The Word Pool: Quiet Chaos: A Creative Writing Toolkit / Game of Words, Meaning, and Imagination.”

“Respected Trunk” – The Word Pool Prompt for May 16, 2026

“Respected Trunk” – The Word Pool Prompt for May 16, 2026.

Using the word pairing, write a sentence, a story, a poem, or draw a sketch, paint a picture. Set your mind free and create. Post it here. Post it there. Post it wherever. Only, please tag it #thewordpool so I can enjoy it with you. Happy creating!

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Respected Trunk – it’s made of cedar wood and holds memories that extend back generations. Christening gowns, her grandmother’s hair, old, cracked photographs of faces from long ago – lives once lived that made her own possible. Old love letters, letters from war, promises made, promises broken, every trinket, every handwritten word a treasure. The respected trunk sits protected in the corner of her room, topped by a crocheted Afghan her grandmother lovingly made of her childhood’s favorite colors – yellow and bright rainbow variegated yarn. Now and then, she ran her fingers over the top of the wood chest to feel closer to the past, knowing its contents, loving each one, praying to be someone who would make her grandmother proud. Oh, how she missed that lady and longed for just one more conversation, one more story, but now, she must settle for the contents of the trunk in the corner, which holds the remains of her grandmother’s life.

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This adjective/noun combo comes to you directly out of “The Word Pool” – I didn’t cheat. I opened the book, took the first adjective I randomly selected with my finger (without looking), and then I turned to the noun section and randomly selected a noun with my finger (again, without looking). Maybe I wanted to choose something different, but no, we go with those FIRST finger-chosen words! Ta-da! It’s that complicated.  Now, we write or draw; whichever we do, we create!

~ Dacia Cunningham, creator of “The Word Pool: Quiet Chaos: A Creative Writing Toolkit / Game of Words, Meaning, and Imagination.”